The Battleship – by Gordon (aged 9)

Battle ShipEarly in the morning when it was still dark, an American battleship came whooshing through the stormy waves.  It was really dark.  It was coming for World War Two.  Many people died in the battleships but many survived.  Three years later, when it was early in the morning, the war stopped.

Gordon (aged 9)

This is Gordon’s first writing exercise with us and I think he has done very well.  Like all boys his age he was anxious about putting words to paper but discovered he enjoyed telling a story others would read.

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