“The Day I Nearly Died” by Harry (aged 8)

snakeOne day, I fondled the ground and it was hot and dry and so I slithered into a deep, dark hole. I felt uncomfortable with the dirt and the rocks on my face. Soon, I detected vibrations that shook the forest and me hard. I recognised that there was something big out there, something that thought that snakes are yummy. The shadow, as big as a person, chucked a spear at me but I struck out at the shadow and chomped the person on his leg. I slithered out of the deep, dark hole and scrambled into a cool, soft hole.

Harry, aged 8

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Filed under children's Stories, creative writing, Short Story, Student's Story

One response to ““The Day I Nearly Died” by Harry (aged 8)

  1. dianalangley

    A great escape, Harry!

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