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The Cat’s Adventure – Arun (aged 7)

Flying catOnce upon a time in a cave there lived a magic cat whose power was to fly as fast as a spear.  The cat had a fluffy tail, black eyes and grey fur.  One day a person called Mimi, whose power was mind control, came and wiped out the cat’s memory so he would forget he could fly.  The cat was a fast thinker and he remembered his power and so he flew off back to his cave.   The magic cat lived happily ever after.

By Arun – aged 7.

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Stories For Boys – By Jack (aged 10)

At midnight behind the enemy lines under a full moonlight sky, two ragged figures stood in the shadows.  The British spies behind the general’s office were feeling nervous and in danger.  It had taken them four days on rough seas to arrive undetected in the middle of a freezing winter night.

They were sent overseas and under cover to receive vital information on the Germans’ military strategy.  On that night behind the office these two men discovered information that would win them the war.

By “The Jackster”, aged 10

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The Greedy Snail – Abbie (aged 10)

Red SnailIn the winter snow many Russian people were working.  The red snail was watching them.  Just then a loud scream came when one of the workers found a giant golden nugget.  The red snail was so amused he wanted to get that golden nugget.  So off he went to get it.  When he got there the red snail found the worker had put in on the ground.  The red snail tried to move the nugget but he could not move it fast enough.  He knew he would not be able to get away without anybody looking, but he tried anyway.  When he did move it, it rolled away with him.  The man did not know where the nugget was but he finally found it beside a dizzy snail.

Abbie – aged 10

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The Black Mouse – Jack (aged 10)

Black MouseOn a deserted island in the middle of the world lived an old and curious black mouse.  He loved to explore but because of his age he was limited from going many places.  Determined to put aside his age, he was going to climb the mountain.  On his journey up to mountain he knew he was to face many challenges.  His first challenge was to climb the staggered ridges, followed by the evil wizard.  This mouse had faced all the challenges and for now, his journey was over, as he reached the village.
Jack (aged 10)

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The man who beat the world record – Robby (aged 12)

LamborghiniBack in the 1990’s, a man drove a yellow Lamborghini all around the world to beat a world record.  The young man, who wore a yellow beany, was a millionaire because he won the lottery.

Starting at Townsville, he drove to Cape York, then went north to Russia on a private ferry which crossed the Arafura Sea, the Banda Sea, the Celebes Sea, the South China Sea, the Philippine Sea and Sea of Okhotsk.  The stop at Okhotsk ferry station was where he drove back onto land before going through Russia to Finland in his yellow Lamborghini on the bumpy roads to beat the world record.  The man, back in the 1990’s, broke the world record and destroyed the yellow Lamborghini.

Robby (aged 12)

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The Lizard – Angus (aged 8)

Lizard

In the morning there was a lizard in the jungle.  He had a very long tongue and he could change colours.  He went up a tree and he changed to brown.  He changed to brown because he wanted to be that colour. He hopped down on the grass and changed to green.

Angus (aged 8)

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The Day The Queensland Minister Got Arrested- By Robby (Aged 12)

Yesterday, down by the Cabbage creek, there was a golden retriever who works as a drug sniffing dog, having a wonderful day off from his normal day job at the Brisbane airport. He was a serious and sometimes cranky dog. Walking down by the creek was the Queensland Minister of Police getting ready for his Channel Ten interview, when the dog smelt some drugs in the back pocket of his jeans. As he was trained to do, the dog chased after the Queensland politician and bit him on the buttocks and put a lot of mud on his expensive suit. The cameraman got his camera fired up and the image went global of the Queensland Minister for Police getting arrested for drugs possession.

Robby (Aged 12)

(*Any relationship to any politician serving or retired is purely ridiculous.)

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Nelly’s and Lucya’s adventure to Mongolia – by Robby (Aged 12)

(Our writing tutor enjoys stretching the abilities of our young writers.  Robby is new to these writing exercises and it is surprising how well the young lads take to these tasks once their confidence is up.  Today they worked on making complex sentences.  How do you think he went?)

Nelly’s and Lucya’s adventure to Mongolia

BridgeThirty years ago, back in the 1980s, in the border between Russia and Mongolia, two sisters had a snow ball fight.  Winter made fifteen year old Nelly and thirteen year old Lucya so happy because they both had fun having snow ball fights and building snow men. One day the sisters went on an adventure and crossed the border into Mongolia at the town of Tashanta in an old white truck on the rough rocky track. When girls’ father Olag told them about the Bridge of Death he was smiling but when they got there, they screamed all the way over the old broken bamboo poles that stretched across the river where it had ripped a big hole in the road. When they arrived in Mongolia they told all their new friends about the Bridge of Death and how to fight with snow balls.

Robbie (Aged 12)

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Kookaburras – Bethany (aged 11)

KookaburraKookaburras are found in trees and in forests and when they are found, they make a laughing noise to call their mates.  Kookaburras have feathery wings and long beaks which help them catch their food.  If you are having a picnic, be careful of kookaburras as they sometimes steal your food when you don’t expect it.  They lay their eggs in a nest and the dad keeps them warm while the mother goes to look for food for the babies.  The mates all meet in trees.

Bethany (aged 11)

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The Frog – Dardo (aged 7)

FrogAt my grandparent’s house there are frogs. I only see them at night.  They are big and green and they live in the watering can.  My favourite part about frogs is you cannot see their ears because they are behind their eyes.  At my grandparent’s place there are frogs.

Dardo aged 7

 

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