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I Can’t Tie My Laces Because I Can’t Write

Man walking on 1 2 3 stepsIt caused me considerable concern when I read that the American Government had dropped teaching cursive writing from the core curriculum in 2010.  They have left it up to the states to decide if it should be taught in elementary schools.  Some have decided not to teach the writing and reading of cursive script.  Their students are not being taught to read or write past the printed letter.

Does not teaching how to write have repercussions other than affecting the way we develop and record our thoughts?  Is it even a concern that we become solely dependant upon smart phones, tablets and computers for recording our words?

People may have asked the same question as the motor car replaced the bicycle or television replaced evening family interaction.  Change produces change and each alteration to our lifestyle needs to be considered for its own new path.  If we haven’t looked far enough down the path before we have taken the first few steps we may arrive at a destination we did not desire.  I do not think an obese society and world environmental problem  was what Henry Ford envisioned with his Model T; nor did Steve Jobs foresee family members retreating to separate rooms when he wanted to bring the world together.

What damage can possibly be caused by not teaching cursive writing to young students?  I have already encountered a young postman who has difficulty delivering hand written letters because they used “running writing”.  So we don’t receive our mail, is that a problem these days?  The fact the young man could not decipher or decode the letters on the envelope is of greater problem to me.

Cursive writing as with all writing requires the development of fine motor skills; skills that come with practice.  The fine dexterity of finger and hand movement learned by a seven or eight year old is the same skill required to tie shoe laces, do up buttons, place a nut on a bolt or to produce a painting.  I have already begun to see within my tuition experience young students unable to control letter and number formation between 8 millimetre lines or contain them within 7 millimetre squares of a quad page.  Is this a problem?

When I was in primary school the pencil and then the pen was an important tool to my learning.  Our teacher came in early to prepare the black board with the day’s lessons.  These lessons were copied into our notebooks.  Maths problems were copied from the board or the text book before being solved.  Our scholastic days were filled with scribing and learning.  Our weekends required us to compose an essay just so we could practise our scribbles and improve our imagination.  Even now I produced drafts for this post with pencil and paper before committing them to digital creation.

Reading, writing and arithmetic formed the foundation of independence for an individual.  With all three mastered a person was armed to contribute to society, create wealth from nothing and control their destiny.  I am afraid the removal of just one may have an impact on creating an independent individual.

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Are Your Expectations Aligned With The Curriculum?

Year 2

Tuition LogoIf you are a parent with a young student in Australia then chances are you have your mind in a muddle as to education expectations.

Teachers and parents are stressing over what appears to be an ever increasing amount of information being crammed into the school curriculum and the minds of our children.  It now appears keyboards are replacing pencils and paper (that should bring down the expense of education) as students learn to use the tool that enables us to govern the information age.  Is managing the flow of information as important as reading, writing and arithmetic?

In Year 1 students have mastered the numbers up to 100 and skip counting by 2, 5 and 10.  This year sees them progress even further on the number line as they move towards recognising and placing order to the numbers to 1,000, and investigate the number sequences of 2, 3, 5 and 10.  It is this year they explore the connection between subtraction and addition.

By the end of this year they will master reading a clock (analogue and digital) to the quarter hour using the words “to” and “past” appropriately.   They will be able to name the months of the year in the correct order as well as the seasons of the year.  They will be able to use a calendar to find the date and know the number of days to the month.

This is only a small amount that is on the curriculum and only relates to maths as this is the area, as a tutor, I see the most problems.  How can you help your child with their studies?  Do you remember this:

“Thirty days has September, April, June and November,
all the rest have thirty-one days clear,
except February alone which has twenty-eight days
and twenty-nine each leap year.”

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The Dragon Fly – by Dardo (aged 7)

Dragon FlyAt midnight we met a dragon fly in a gum tree.  He could turn people into  ants.  He was a mean dragon fly who took over their kingdoms.  He moved in an lived there.  That is the story of the dragon fly in the gum tree.

Dardo, aged 7

 

It would appear our seven year old students are battling it out for who can write the most stories.  It was only the beginning of the year these young lads showed a complete terror of putting their thoughts on paper, or even bringing them out into the real world.  They were afraid people would not enjoy them; would find them silly; would laugh at their efforts; say they couldn’t spell; etc.  All this going on in the head of a seven year old, is it any wonder boys do not like to write?

Yes, some of these stories are silly, peculiar or may not make sense but writers call upon their experience when they put pen to paper (or fingers to keyboards).  We are asking our young students to use their imagination to replace their experience just as long as they over come their fear and begin to write.  Can you imagine what a writer will be like in years to come when he can build his imagination upon his experience.

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Are Your Expectations Aligned With The Curriculum?

Man walking on 1 2 3 stepsThere has been some talk of late about the school curriculum and the changes it is going through.  These changes, like any change, cause ripple effects of anxiety on students, teachers and parents.  But what are the learning expectations of our young students?

I have been looking at www.australiancurriculum.edu.au for some guidance just so I, as a tutor, am aware and aligned with expectations.  I would advise popping onto the website and having a look.  Meanwhile I will give a brief summary focusing on maths as this is the area parent seek the most guidance from tutors.

By the  end of Year One a school student is expected to know the numbers to one hundred; skip count by 2, 5 and 10; and be able to locate numbers on a number line.  Simple addition is accomplished by counting on, re-arranging or performing partitioning.  Fractions are introduced as they learn to recognise “1/2” and be able to tell the time to the half hour.

I mentioned only a small area of the curriculum as these are the areas I see most when a student is presented for tuition.  At this stage of learning any short-coming in these areas may be made up by parents sitting down with their little one and turn learning into some form of game.  There are a number of aids available from various websites and suggestions on the Australian Curriculum site.

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Cows in Winter by Dionara (aged 6)

CowThe cows in the North Pole in winter feel cold.  They like the snowing days.  The blue sky high above was cloudy.  All day and night the poor cows shiver.

 Dionara aged 6.

 

Some of you may be wondering how it is that our students produce the stories that are published on this site.  Well, here is our process.  We hand the children a foolscap page, a pencil and some motivation.  Presently they are looking at the paintings on our walls and choosing that as their subject matter.  In this case Dionara chose a cow (actually the photograph is just the ears and horns of a cow) in a hot stock yard.  I guess in her mind she would prefer the cow to be cooler than it was.  Then we encourage them to expand on that thought.  There is nothing elaborate and at times it requires some coaxing to bring the story out.

The goal is to practise using their imagination, word sounding skills and hands and fingers to form the letters with a pencil (keyboards do not help with fine motor skills at this stage).  We fix up the spelling for the publication but encourage them to have a go at sounding the words and writing the letters for those sounds.  Most of all it has to be fun!

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The Day Rosie Ran Into The Bush by Oscar (aged 7)

CatOn Oscar’s birthday your cat ran into a bush where there were spiders and paddy melons.  The cat was a Chinese cat who was brown and furry under the belly.  Rosie the cat saw a paddy melon and so she ran into a home.  In the house lived a family named The Clays and Mr Clay got a wet mop and swept the cat outside.  Next time Oscar has a birthday the cat won’t run into the bush.

By Oscar – aged 7

Year two in school and what a year of change is expected in our children.  One year ago they were flat out possessing the manual dexterity to control a pencil to write the alphabet.  One year on and they have to learn to formulate letters into words while constructing sentences into a story they are hearing in their head.  How difficult is this?

As adults we, thankfully, have no memory of these difficult years but if you want to put this process into perspective learning to write a short story is about as difficult as learning to approach an intersection in a manually driven car.  Think about this process for a minute – approach the intersection; foot off the accelerator and onto the brake to slow down; revs falling in the motor and now I have to change gear; still slowing and have to do it again; check the intersection as you approach ….. well you get the idea.

We all learn how to drive and eventually we all learn how to write, it just takes time and confidence with a few mistakes along the way.  Time we have, the confidence we gain from those around us.

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Spider Monkey by Dardo (aged 7)

MonkeyAt night in the big Amazon forest the spider monkey hunted.  He went looking for a praying mantis to eat for lunch.  He found one but it was too big to catch for his lunch.  It was scary to catch so he went on looking with his tummy rumbling.

The  end.

Dardo – Aged 7

 “It’s alright, I don’t need you to watch me,” said young Dardo the day he sat down to write his story.   Dardo used to have a lot of trouble writing and it was very frustrating for him.  Now he loves it as he is choosing quite complex words and getting very close to the correct spelling as he sounds out the words he has chosen and writes them at the same time.  Off and running with his new creative skills Dardo is progressing in leaps and bounds writing great little stories that no longer need a translator to understand.  Well Done Mister Dardo.

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The Dugong’s Trip – by Oliver (aged 9)

DugongOn a cold winter’s night in Somalia on the eastern coast of Africa the dugong became completely lost.  He was a grey dugong with big brown eyes and whiskers.  He set out on a long swim to India but the dugong ran into a big black sea snake.  The dugong did not know where he was going and so he swam slowly to Western Australia where the Indian Ocean was rough and wavy.  It was summer and day time there and the dugong was home at last.

by Oliver (aged 9)

One of the problems new young writers experience is commencing each sentence with the subject.  In this example Oliver was encouraged to steer away from beginning each sentence with “The dugong”.  You may also notice that the telling of the story is a little more complex to the examples of younger writers.  A format we teach young writers is:

  • First sentence – When and where to set the time and place
  • Second sentence – Who: describe the subject of the story
  • Third & Fourth sentence – what happened & what happened
  • Fifth sentence – Close the circle by echoing something that happened in the first sentence

I think you will agree that young Oliver is grasping the concept of the format.

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The Battle Ship – Angus (aged 8)

SailorOne Autumn there was a battle ship in the Atlantic  Ocean.  It was a black and red and white.  It sailed around doing nothing.  Inside the battle ship the sailors were happy.  There were dugongs swimming around the battle ship.

 Angus, aged 8

Learning to write, particularly for boys, can be a daunting task as they would prefer to not be embarrassed by criticisms of their words.  You see, children are rarely embarrassed by what they say or write.  What embarrasses them are the words we, as adults, say about what they have said or written.  A misplaced laugh or thoughtless “Don’t be silly” comment may have a ripple effect on a young mind that carries through life.  The above short story was encouraged to grow from “A ship sailed on the ocean.”  Isn’t it marvellous what emerges with guidance and encouragement?

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A Girl is Hurt – Dionara (aged 6)

Girl WalkingThe girl was pretty.  She walked along the footpath.  Someone she didn’t know was behind her riding a bike.  They ran into her and she ended up in the hospital.  She wasn’t happy.

Dionara (aged 6)

We encourage students to use their imagination to tell stories and transfer them to words on a page.  Children want to tell stories verbally and some do so wonderfully.  As adults we all know of the young child who comes running up to you out of breath with enthusiasm to tell you about the new puppy down the road.

The process of story telling is complicated when a child goes to school and learns the new communication pathway of writing.  There are things to do with your hands and fingers to guide the pencil across the paper; you have to think about forming the new letters into the words that you can say so easily; you have to try to remember what it was you were saying and it all gets muddled up.  It is not easy being a six year old trying to tell a story.

Learning is a stepping stone process and every step should be observed with encouragement and enthusiasm.  Stumbles and falls will always occur and should be guided by your helping hand to dust off and set right again.  It is a lifelong process that begins with you, the parent.

I love this little story by Dionara, aged 6.

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